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Year 3 Descriptive Writing Example

Age
7–9
School year
Year 3
Skills
description · adjectives · vocabulary

Wondering what good descriptive writing looks like in Year 3? Here is an example written to the task: “Describe a market.”

Read it, then look at the annotations to see the things a Year 3 writer is doing well — the same things Nuliko looks for.

The market was busy and loud. Bright red apples were stacked in wooden boxes, and the smell of warm bread floated through the air. A man shouted, “Fresh fish! Get your fresh fish!” while children raced between the stalls, laughing. My favourite stall sold sweets. Jars of gleaming toffees and stripy mints sparkled in the sunshine. I could almost taste them just by looking.

What makes this writing effective

  • ⭐ Adjectives: “Bright red”, “warm”, “gleaming”, “stripy” help the reader picture the scene.
  • ⭐ Using the senses: Sight, smell and sound are all used — not just what things look like.
  • ⭐ A bit of speech: The stallholder's shout brings the market to life.
  • ⭐ Personal touch: “My favourite stall” makes the description feel real and interesting.

Success checklist

  • ✅ I can use adjectives to describe things clearly.
  • ✅ I can describe using more than one sense.
  • ✅ I can help the reader picture what I am describing.

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